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The void

I taste my heart beat in my mouth
Listen to my hollow veins
Feel the silence throughout my corpse
Slicing through reality
I’d rather hear the screams
Then nothing at all
My hair thick with blood
Wounds deeper then before
Crooked smile on my face
Pain I can’t even remember
But deep within my body
A tired haze and sore limbs
My mind is blocked with scabs of hate
Death feeling closer to me then I thought
Cuts that amounted to nothing
Nothing but decoration

The one thing I did not forget…

You never even saw me bleeding
©2005-2009 ~yet2bforsaken
:iconyet2bforsaken:

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bleh... its one of my shorter ones and im pretty happy with the way it turned out...

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:iconheartthatfeelsnolove:
Cuts that amounted to nothing
Nothing but decoration

The one thing I did not forget…

You never even saw me bleeding


......beautiful....
:iconyet2bforsaken:
Thanks!

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...:halfliquid:
"The start of faith is disbelief
Love begins alone
Ecstasy is loss' child
Everstill is never's soul"
:iconsophocleszia:
"you never saw me bleeding"... that's so affecting.

i admire you for writing about your pain, very well written.

:blackrose::blackrose::blackrose:

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(+)Je n' oublie jamais.(+)
:blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose::blackrose:
:iconyet2bforsaken:
thanks! not all of it is my problems.. some of it is inspired by it but a lot of it is just going off something and trying to imagine how it would feel

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...:halfliquid:
"The start of faith is disbelief
Love begins alone
Ecstasy is loss' child
Everstill is never's soul"

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