Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


You wouldnt even answer
Your lips forbidden from what i used to taste
How i licked the blood off your busted lip
Held you until you stopped crying
You old me i made it better
But i didnt i guess
Dark hair that i used to comb through
With hands that used to do more then hold a blade to my throat
You even turned away
All those promises lost...
And the only thing left are the memories
Memories that burn
Memories that cut
Ones I cant stop
All the things i did wrong
things i wish had gone better
But ones  i think of everyday
no matter how many times you burn out my hope
then stomp out any pride i have left
I needed you
I need you now more then before
You may have forgotten how much i care
Only a mistake in the back of your cobwebbed mind
But i havent forgotten because the feelings havent changed
there only harder to hold
Ones that seem to be squezing to you more and more
but you are slipping through my cold fingers
the tighter i grip the less i achieve
..But i'll never let go..
©2005-2009 ~yet2bforsaken
:iconyet2bforsaken:

Author's Comments

...i normally dont do this but i suck with titles.. so if anyone could please give me an idea that'd be awesome thanks...

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icontepara:
"Forever in my memorys" ?
"Forever in my heart" ?

Thats a great poem, well wrighten.

Through an idea or two at ya there. Use one if you like :)

--
=Black-White-Club Where you can find the best B&W and sepia art on dA.
=DeviantArtSecret Share your secrets.
A stranger is just someone you havent met yet!
:iconyet2bforsaken:
hmm yeah ill look through that and see if i can maybe add it in thanks

--
...:halfliquid:
"The start of faith is disbelief
Love begins alone
Ecstasy is loss' child
Everstill is never's soul"
:icontepara:
I ment for the title lol.. Not part of the poem :P Its perfect as it is :D

--
=Black-White-Club Where you can find the best B&W and sepia art on dA.
=DeviantArtSecret Share your secrets.
A stranger is just someone you havent met yet!
:iconblackasismyheart:
This is such a great poem. Its really deep. U totall rock. :glomp:

--
"I can't relate to 99% of humanity." :P

ITS ME!

:( :¬) :{) :~> :*( :^)

:clap: :lmao: :euphoria: :fusionrock: :mangapunksai:


:nirvana: :headbang: :eyepopping: :frustrated:

(just LOVE pics lol)
:iconyet2bforsaken:
thanks a lot^^

--
...:halfliquid:
"The start of faith is disbelief
Love begins alone
Ecstasy is loss' child
Everstill is never's soul"
:iconyet2bforsaken:
haha yeah i realized that after i responded i was like oh wow i am a total blond..hah

--
...:halfliquid:
"The start of faith is disbelief
Love begins alone
Ecstasy is loss' child
Everstill is never's soul"
:icontepara:
Lol, we all have blonde moments :P

--
=Black-White-Club Where you can find the best B&W and sepia art on dA.
=DeviantArtSecret Share your secrets.
A stranger is just someone you havent met yet!
:iconyet2bforsaken:
hehehehe

--
...:halfliquid:
"The start of faith is disbelief
Love begins alone
Ecstasy is loss' child
Everstill is never's soul"
:iconcryingdove:
you continue to amaze me hun... thats beautiful, but sorry i have no idea about a title :p

--
If this isn't love, then this is the closest I've ever been. Do you think we have a chance tonight? As streetlights sing an Audrey's song

Details

May 23, 2005
1.2 KB

Statistics

10
0
101 (0 today)
2 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map